Tiger gate crashes Katy and Russell’s wedding!!!
Pop star Katy Perry and British comedian Russell brand spent their first night as husband and wife surrounded by armed guards after the incident of a tiger gate crashing their wedding luckily not ruining the big day for both of the celebs, happily never scared away the guests.
Russell bought his new wedded wife a couple of wedding presents, Katy also brought her new wedded husband a couple of wedding presents.
They also was asked on twitter for the wedding to be private ,with no press
Chante
ReplyDeleteThis is a good piece of copy writing. You have chosen to focus on a small, manageable part of the story. This is a PASS.
To improve this you should make sure that you develop your use of grammar and punctuation. The first paragraph is one long sentence. How could you fix that?
Also, you mention presents. Was there anything unusual about that? If so, mention it.
Mr Monahan