EXT. IN A BACK OF A CAB-NIGHT
KATE came out a club very drunk, a man suggests to book her a cab because it was very late for her to get the bus home. So KATE waits outside the club for her booked cab. KATE sees her cab arrive and hops in. As KATE was drunk she did not really notice how strange the cabbie looked and just began to give her details.
KATE
Hi sir, can you please take me to swarn street, palsy house
CAB DRIVER
Ok we should get there in a while...
KATE
What do you mean in a while?!!
CAB DRIVER
O nothing, its a expression in words...
KATE thought to herself a while, what does he mean with out clocking she was driving through a grave yard. Finally KATE notices some graves pasting her window.
KATE
Ermmm. Excuse me where you going?!! You went past my house 10minutes ago!!
KATE luckily opens the door and runs free following the path that leads out.
CAB DRIVER
Hey!!!!! Wait you haven’t paid me, you told me to take you home and i have!
KATE
What are you seriously playing at you psycho!!
CAB DRIVER
Im not playing at anything!!
KATE
Well bad luck your not getting your money!
KATE rushes round
KATE carries on running and finally reaches her home but never clocked she was being followed by the cab driver...
KATE was found dead the next day.
Chante
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Great script. You have used the correct formatting. You have used the right indents to show the difference between the action and the dialogue. All character names have been written in capitals and there are directions for the characters in brackets.
To make this even better just make sure the alignment of the dialogue is correct - some of it is not in line and it could get confused with the action.
Also, be sure to write about what we see on screen - not just "she was fond dead." What does the audience see on screen at this point?
Mr Monahan
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