Friday, 3 February 2012

This is my first script piece which went really good and im very proud of my first script peice from scratch.






INT. SHAUNA’S HOUSE- DAY
CHANELLE knocks on SHAUNA’S door. SHAUNA opens the door and lets CHANELLE in. They both walk up the stairs to SHAUNA’S room. CHANELLE starts to huff and puff and started to not give SHAUNA eye contact as if something was to be wrong. SHAUNA sensed that something was wrong.
              SHAUNA
           Yoo, CHANELLE fam what’s wrong?!...
              CHANELLE
          Fam there’s not wrong cha.
CHANELLE got up and sat on the other side of the bed
              SHAUNA
Skeeeeeeen! Bruv I know there’s something wrong just tell me init I thought we was dons just tell me its casj.
              CHANELLE
Okay I’m going to tell you but promise not to start hyping and that.
              SHAUNA
Yeahyeah I will try init but if its something proper bad involving you or me I’m going to back us up.
              CHANELLE
Alright I’m going to tell you I cant keep it a secret any longer... malikai has been cheating on you, it’s that yat you’ve been beefing...
     SHAUNA
WHAATT SKEEENN! ALLOW IT. Why u chatting crap to me say nothing... I thought we was true dons
    

CHANELLE
BMT! True talks.. I’m not gassing I saw them at Tesco lipsing.
SHAUNA
Oo CHANELLE
SHAUNA snatches her phone out of her pocket and then started to text malikai
SHAUNA
You know I’m dumping his sorry ass.
     CHANELLE
That’s more like it fam, anyway you don’t need a man in your life you got true dons like me who would always stick with you.
SHAUNA
Thanks chan. 

1 comment:

  1. Chante
    Great work again. Just make sure you've got all the alignment sorted out. Some of the lines start in the wrong place. That can make it a bit harder for a director or actor to read.

    MERIT
    Mr Monahan

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